This is beautifully presented, Karen, and fulfils the design brief. However, as far as content is concerned, I am not sure how much is your own words: remember to offer reasons why you chose Yates and what makes him interesting for you. The first half page should be about the director. Any research would have revealed that he started in television. This Guardian review with him is also interesting:
This is beautifully presented, Karen, and fulfils the design brief. However, as far as content is concerned, I am not sure how much is your own words: remember to offer reasons why you chose Yates and what makes him interesting for you. The first half page should be about the director. Any research would have revealed that he started in television. This Guardian review with him is also interesting:
ReplyDeletehttp://www.guardian.co.uk/film/2007/jul/02/1
Grade B+